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Carl
10-16-2007, 07:12 PM
All in all, it hadn't been a good day. Bad traffic, a malfunctioning computer, incompetent coworkers and a sore back all made me a seething cauldron of rage. But more importantly for this story, it had been over forty-eight hours since I'd last taken a dump. I'd tried to jumpstart the process, beginning my day with a bowl of bowel-cleansing fiber cereal, following it with six cups of coffee at work, and adding a bean-laden lunch at Taco Bell. As I was returning home from work, my insides let me know with subtle rumbles and the emission of the occasional tiny fart that Big Things would be happening soon. Alas, I had to stop at the mall to pick up an order for my wife. I completed this task, and as I was walking past the stores on my way backto the car, I noticed a large sale sign proclaiming, "Everything Must Go!" This was prophetic, for my colon informed me with a sudden violent cramp and a wet, squeaky fart that everything was indeed about to go. I hurried to the mall bathrooms. I surveyed the five stalls, which I have numbered 0 through 4 for your convenience:

0.Occupied.

1.Clean, but Bathroom Protocol forbids its use, as it's next to the occupied one.

2.Poo on seat.

3.Poo and toilet paper in bowl, unidentifiable liquid splattered on seat.

4.No toilet paper, no stall door, unidentifiable sticky object near base of
toilet.

Clearly, it had to be Stall ..1. I trudged back, entered, dropped trou and sat down. I'm normally a fairly Shameful Sh1tter. I wasn't happy about being next to the occupied stall, but Big Things were afoot.

I was just getting ready to bear down when all of a sudden the sweet sounds of Beethoven came from next door, followed by a fumbling, and then the sound of a voice answering the ringing phone. As usual for a cell phone conversation, the voice was exactly 8 dB louder than it needed to be. Out of Shameful habit, my sphincter slammed shut. The inane conversation went on and on. Mr. Sh1tter was blathering to Mrs. Sh1tter about the sh1tty day he had. I sat there, cramping and miserable, waiting for him to finish. As the loud conversation dragged on, I became angrier and angrier, thinking that I, too, had a crappy day, but I was too polite to yak about in public. My bowels let me know in no uncertain terms that if I didn't get crapping soon, my day would be getting even crappier.

Finally my anger reached a point that overcame Shamefulness. I no longer cared. I gripped the toilet paper holder with one hand, braced my other hand against the side of the stall, and pushed with all my might. I was rewarded with a fart of colossal magnitude -- a cross between the sound of someone ripping a very wet bed sheet in half and of plywood being torn off a wall. The sound gradually transitioned into a heavily modulated low-RPM tone, not unlike someone firing up a Harley. I managed to hit the resonance frequency of the stall, and it shook gently.

Once my @ss cheeks stopped flapping in the breeze, three things became apparent:
(1) The next-door conversation had ceased;
(2) my colon's continued seizing indicated that there was more to come; and
(3) the bathroom was now beset by a horrible, eldritch stench.

It was as if a gateway to Hell had been opened. The foul miasma quickly made its way underthe stall and began choking my poop-mate. This initial "herald" fart had ended his conversation in mid-sentence.

"Oh my God," I heard him utter, following it with suppressed sounds of choking, and then, "No, baby, that wasn't me (cough, gag), you could hear that (gag)??"

Now there was no stopping me. I pushed for all I was worth. I could swear that in the resulting cacophony of rips, squirts, splashes, poots, and blasts, I was actually lifted slightly off the pot. The amount of stuff in me was incredible. It sprayed against the bowl with tremendous force. Later, in surveying the damage, I'd see that liquid poop had actually managed to
ricochet out of the bowl and run down the side on to the floor. But for now, all I could do was hang on for the ride.

Next door I could hear him fumbling with the paper dispenser as he desperately tried to finish his task. Little snatches of conversation made themselves heard over my anal symphony: "Gotta go... horrible... throw up... in my mouth... not... make it... tell the kids... love them... oh God..." followed by more sounds of suppressed gagging and retching.

Alas, it is evidently difficult to hold one's phone and wipe one's bum at the same time. Just as my high-pressure abuse of the toilet was winding down, I heard a plop and splash from next door, followed by string of swear words and gags. My poop-mate had dropped his phone into the toilet.

There was a lull in my production, and the restroom became deathly quiet. I could envision him standing there, wondering what to do. A final anal announcement came trumpeting from my behind, small chunks plopping noisily into the water. That must have been the last straw. I heard a flush, a fumbling with the lock, and then the stall door was thrown open. I heard him running out of the bathroom, slamming the door behind him.

After a considerable amount of paperwork, I got up and surveyed the damage. I felt bad for the janitor who'd be forced to deal with this, but I knew that flushing was not an option. No toilet in the world could handle that unholy mess. Flushing would only lead to a floor flooded with filth.

As I left, I glanced into the next-door stall. Nothing remained in the bowl. Had he flushed his phone, or had he plucked it out and left the bathroom with nasty unwashed hands? The world will never know.

I exited the bathroom, momentarily proud and Shameless, looking around for a face glaring at me. But I saw no one. I suspect that somehow my supernatural elimination has managed to transfer my Shamefulness to my anonymous poop-mate. I think it'll be a long time before he can bring himself to poop in public -- and I doubt he'll ever again answer his cell phone in the shitter. And this, my friends, is why you should never talk on your phone in the bathroom.

k062693w
10-16-2007, 07:18 PM
That is Flippin Hilarious!!!!!!!:lol::lol::lol::lol::lol::lol::lol :

Black03SVT
10-16-2007, 08:01 PM
I have tears in my eyes:lol::lol::lol::lol::lol::lol::lol::lol::fart: :fart:

stangman_5
10-16-2007, 08:06 PM
:lol::lol::lol::rofl::rofl: That was the funniest SHIT I have heard all day........Thanks

nitrous_mike
10-16-2007, 08:30 PM
:lol::lol::lol: that was great :lol::lol::lol:

mustang429
10-16-2007, 09:57 PM
that's just to funny

PonymanfiveO
10-16-2007, 11:14 PM
OMG! aaaahahahaha...


I know thats not a true story from you thought Carl....no way.

Carl
10-16-2007, 11:19 PM
You know it Matt, I don't have that kind of imagination.

DeckerEnt
10-16-2007, 11:34 PM
Oh my God!! I am still smiling ear to ear. There is a tear in my eye. Did Kevin have a hand in this? Too funny.
Keith

Grey Wolf
10-16-2007, 11:55 PM
I was nearly crying at this from laughing, even though I had a feeling it was not true since I had read something very similar to this online before. Never gets old.

VuNiT3
10-17-2007, 07:38 AM
That was fuggin hilarious!! :lol::lol::lol: I am sitting here at my desk crying from laughing so hard! I needed that.

Black Horse
10-17-2007, 08:01 AM
Cracked me right the fug up! Carl, I dont know where you found this profound little morsel, its great (and very Kevin-esque).

04comporangegt
10-17-2007, 08:17 AM
:rofl::rofl::rofl::rofl:I just laughed out loud at work and my buddy is looking at me all weird. HAHA

Demonracer
10-17-2007, 04:19 PM
That is just to perfect.

aperacer
10-17-2007, 05:02 PM
i had to start over a couple time. i could not stop laughing... that is some good "shit"

R825OH
10-17-2007, 05:09 PM
Oh SHIT :eek:that is funny! My dogs think I'm crazy I am laughing so hard:lol::lol::lol:

Blacksunshine
10-17-2007, 05:43 PM
My wife and myself are still laughing like crazy...awesome !!!! That rules....

dedpedal
10-17-2007, 05:50 PM
Freaking awesome ! The perfect laffable ending to a shitty day on my part.

facemelter71
10-17-2007, 05:55 PM
Oh my god thats great.Im not answering my phone any more.

djom1cincy
10-17-2007, 08:58 PM
my jaws hurt from laughter. thanks

JaxWax
10-18-2007, 07:57 PM
my guts actually are hurting and the muscles in my face........WTF!

Funnier than all get out - what a writer!

Scott

peanutxc09
10-22-2007, 11:26 PM
LOL:lol::rofl: That was the best story ever, I am laughing like crazy! It was told in such good detail without it being over the top. Poop stories are always funny no matter the situation:D

-Patti

Lexstang
10-28-2007, 02:10 AM
I had predicted you had dropped your phone in, but that story was way better than I expected.